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October 18, 2010
  John B. Crawford Chief Executive Officer
On the Move Systems Corp.
7674 37
th Street Circle East
Sarasota, FL 34243
Re: On the Move Systems Corp.
Amendment No. 1 to Registrati on Statement on Form S-1
Filed October 4, 2010
  File No. 333-168530

Dear Mr. Crawford:

We have received your response to our prior comment letter to you dated August 31,
2010 and have the following a dditional comments.
 Prospectus Cover Page

1. Please revise to limit your outside cover to  one page.  Refer to  501(b) of Regulation
S-K.
 Calculation of Registration Fee, page 3

2. Please revise the fee table to specify the subsection of Rule 457 on which you are relying.

Business Summary, page 8

3. Refer to the first paragraph of this section.  Please revise to clarify that as of May 31,
2010 you had nominal cash assets, as opposed to as of May 31, 2009.

4. Please add a sentence to your first paragraph to disclose, if true, that you have taken
no steps to secure the $425,000 additional fi nancing that you will need to implement
your business plan.

5. Refer to the third and fourth full paragraphs.  Please revise here and in your “Business
Description” section to indicate, if true, that you have not commenced providing any
services, have not created relationships w ith any potential customers, and have not

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obtained any inventory.  State that there is  no guarantee you will ever be able to do
so.

6. Refer to the last paragraph of this secti on.  Please revise here and in your “Business
Description” section to state, if true, that you have taken no steps to market your
services, to exhibit at regional shows, or to establish a webs ite.  State that there is no
guarantee that you will ever be able to do so.
 Summary of Our Financial Information, page 9

7. Please revise to indicate that your date of inception was March 25, 2010, as opposed to March 25, 2009.
 Risk Factors, page 9

 General

8. Please add a risk factor to discuss that  Mr. Crawford has another business that
provides the same types of services and will compete with you.

Use of Proceeds, page 19

9. Please advise as to why the amount of your public company reporting costs will
change based on the amount of shares sold.  Please also advise as to why the numbers
here differ from those on page 32 of your filing.
 Business Strategy, page 26

10. Please revise your first paragraph to di sclose that you have taken no steps to
implement your strategy and there is no gua rantee you will ever be able to do so.

11. Provide the basis for your belief that you w ill be able to servi ce an area within a 100
mile radius of your base of operations.

Installed Products, page 27

12. Please revise the first paragraph of this section to indicate that you have taken no
steps to obtain an inventory and that ther e is no guarantee you will ever provide the
services or have the products  that you intend to offer.

Business Plan Implementation Schedule, page 27

13. Please revise to indicate that you have taken no steps to secure the $425,000 in additional financing that you will need to implement your business plan.

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14. We note your response to our prior co mment 24.  Although you state you are unable
to establish a schedule for the completion of specific tasks, please revise to include a
timeline of when you intend to commence th e implementation of each step in your
business plan.  Please also advise as to  how you intend to implement your business
plan in a way that is “concurrent or near  concurrent and prog ressive.”  If you are
unable to include a timeline for the implementation of your  business plan, please add
a risk factor to discuss this.

15. Please revise to discuss how you have determ ined that all the as pects of your business
plan are scalable in terms of si ze, quality and effectiveness.

16. We note your response to our prior comment 22 and reissue.  Please revise here and
in your “Plan of Operation” section to pr ovide a detailed narrative as to how your
business plans will change if you raise 25%, 50%, 75% or 100% of the offering proceeds.
 Competition, page 27

17. Please delete references to the larger comp anies with whom you intend to compete, as
based on your lack of revenues and limited assets, there is no indication you will be able to compete with these companies.
 Management’s Discussion And Analysis of Financial Conditions and Results of Operations, page
31

18. Refer to the anticipated expenses chart.  Please advise as to what you mean by
“Insurance – G & A.”  Similarly revise  your “Use of Proceeds” section.

19. We note your response to our prior comment  37 and reissue.  Refer to the second
paragraph on page 33 and your statement that you intend to pursue capital through sources such as your officer and director.  Please disclose whether your officer and
director has indicated, either  verbally or in writing, th at he intends to provide
additional financing to the business.

20. Please revise to disclose, in detail, the st eps you intend to take to  identify sources of
the $425,000 in financing required to implement your business plan.

Dealer Prospectus Delivery Obligation, page II-2

21. Please move this to the back page of the prospectus, which should appear before the
Part II information.

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Opinion of Counsel, Exhibit 5.1

22. We note your response to our prior comment 42.  Please confirm that you will update the opinion to the date of effectiveness.

We urge all persons who are responsible for th e accuracy and adequacy of the disclosure
in the filing to be certain that the filing incl udes the information the Securities Act of 1933 and
all applicable Securities Act rules require.  Since the company and its management are in
possession of all facts relating to a company’s disclosure, they are responsible for the accuracy and adequacy of the disclosures they have made.
Notwithstanding our comments, in the event you request acceleration of  the effective date
of the pending registration statement please pr ovide a written statement from the company
acknowledging that:
• should the Commission or the staff, acting purs uant to delegated authority, declare the
filing effective, it does not foreclose the Co mmission from taking any action with respect
to the filing;

• the action of the Commission or the staff, acting pursuant to delegated authority, in
declaring the filing effective, does not relieve the company from its full responsibility for
the adequacy and accuracy of the disclosure in the filing; and

• the company may not assert staff comments a nd the declaration of effectiveness as a
defense in any proceeding initiated by the Commission or any person under the federal securities laws of the United States.

Please refer to Rules 460 and 461 regarding re quests for acceleration.  We will consider a
written request for acceleration of  the effective date of the regi stration statement as confirmation
of the fact that those reques ting acceleration are aware of thei r respective responsibilities under
the Securities Act of 1933 and the Securities Excha nge Act of 1934 as they relate to the proposed
public offering of the securities specified in the above registration stat ement.  Please allow
adequate time for us to review any amendment prior to the requested effective date of the registration statement.

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You may contact Jean Yu at  (202) 551-3305 or Joe Foti at (202) 551-3816 if you have
questions regarding comments on th e financial statements and rela ted matters.  Please contact
Chanda DeLong at (202) 551-3490 or me at (202) 551-3324 with any other questions.
Sincerely,

John Stickel Attorney-Advisor
cc:  Mr. William L. MacDonald via facsimile (604) 681-4760